Please Critique My First Video!

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Paige L.

Feb 13, 2013

Paige L.

So I just posted my first beauty video, and I've learned a lot even from that. I know there are a lot of things that I could improve on, but I'd like to get some of your opinions as well. Here's the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7O-XRR20HEI
Thanks in advance!

Allison W.

Feb 13, 2013

Allison W.

I liked it. :) You could maybe show the products a little slower. So you can see the brand and what it is. I could only see a few. Other than that I liked it. It was a really nice look. Really soft and beautiful. Good job. :)

Jes T.

Feb 13, 2013

Jes T.

I like it! :) Maybe explain what you're doing/what techniques you're using in next one? :) And I have the same one direction poster, hahaha.

Lolli S.

Feb 13, 2013

Lolli S.

Like it bt mre practice mks perfect.I appreciate its close up.To me its simple and products appeared to b inexpensive.Good for you.

Ena J.

Feb 13, 2013

Ena J.

I like it a lot :)

Brooke D.

Feb 13, 2013

Brooke D.

I liked it too. :)
But yeah maybe say what you're doing.

And you should curl your eyelashes before you use mascara,
Doing it after can cause them to snap off. :)

Paige L.

Feb 13, 2013

Paige L.

Thank you everyone!!  :-)

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