My first blog post... really need a bit of help!

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Andrea S.

Oct 31, 2012

Andrea S.

Hi guys,

I'm in the process of transferring the stuff on my wordpress blog onto Blogspot. Hoever it's been a few months and I feel like my writing style has changed and so I wrote my first ever public product review. To be honest i have no idea what I'm doing, I keep thinking it sounds bad when I read it to myself so I was wondering if anyone could take a look at it for me? I really need some feedback! Criticism welcome!

http://missandreascarlet.blogspot.co.uk/2012/09/bobbi-brown-bbu-palette.html

Leanna S.

Nov 2, 2012

Leanna S.

Firstly i want to say i think your blog is pretty good! trust me ive been posting the same post youve just posted since i started my blog too! my only critique would be in agreement with stacey about the text color. The white makes it kind of hard to read. Its too bright. Thats the only thing i would say. Other than that i like it.

Stop by and check mine out as well chicndivine.blogspot.com :)

Andrea S.

Nov 3, 2012

Andrea S.

Thank you so much for getting back to me girls! I see what you mean about the text, I'd like to keep the black background so do you have any suggestions for colours that might be easier to read? I've also found out how to make my posts comment-able!

Following you both! :)

Leanna S.

Nov 3, 2012

Leanna S.

Your welcome! I would suggest darker colors, as it was suggested to me ad well because initially before my gray text i had a fuschia color. Which was pretty but too harsh on the eyes. I would suggest anything thats not too bright but not too dark . Neutral colors 

Danae H.

Nov 12, 2012

Danae H.

my blog: http://pastel-pink-lace.blogspot.com.au/ :) xx

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