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Sep 13, 2013

Grace D.

I wrote an original poem, do you like it?

If the world was free,
could do as you please.
You could jump for the stars...
Instead of crumbling to your knees.
I'll just reach for the sky...
Even if I fall,
Because You Only Live Once.
Trust me,
That's all.

 ~Anonymous

Sep 13, 2013

Grace D.

You could*

Sep 13, 2013

Yesenia C.

I liked it!! Great girl!! Don't stopp and keep them coming!

Sep 13, 2013

Grace D.

Thank you! Xo <3.

Sep 13, 2013

Viviana F.

Yes!! I love this!!

Sep 13, 2013

Lauren B.

Cute!!

Sep 13, 2013

Grace D.

Thanks :)

Sep 13, 2013

Grace D.

Tell me what it is!

Sep 13, 2013

Kateria J.

Cool and cute

Sep 13, 2013

Grace D.

Thank you bby gurl.

Sep 13, 2013

Yasmina C.

cute

Sep 13, 2013

Juana R.

Beautiful poem, I like it :)

Sep 13, 2013

Nadra J.

I really don't mean to sound rude, but it's kind of basic and at an elementary level. It lacks emotional appeal and structure. Try more articulate words, and don't focus on rhyming so much. I got the message to were trying to convey so that's good.
@Claire I liked yours :)

Sep 13, 2013

Grace D.

I'm only 13, I hope you know that.