Please open!! Thank you so much!!

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Aug 14, 2014

Nicolet K.

I just made a blog and I really would like to get feedback on how it is. It's a fashion and diy blog and right now I have mostly DIY's (In the "about" section there's a slideshow)but I would like to get ideas on what I should do with fashion. Thank you 😊www.atparadise.weebly.com.

Aug 14, 2014

Ashley D.

In the future this belongs in Intros and Promotions. Please read the fourm rules about posting or in the future mis placed posts could be deleted.

Aug 14, 2014

Janet B.

This post is in the wrong category.
It should be moved to Intros & Promotions.

Aug 14, 2014

katie s.

I'm not sure if you're allowed to even post this kind of stuff bc the rules state no links to other websites or blogs.

Aug 14, 2014

Rissa G.

She is allowed to, just not on other's threads ^

anyways, I'll check it out Nicolet!

Aug 14, 2014

Javian B.

It tells me that your site has not yet been published.

Aug 14, 2014

Janet B.

It says that you are open to a little constructive critisism, so I hope you won't find this too imposing, lol!!
I've corrected your about you paragraph so that the grammar is right and flows better:

This is more than just a blog to me. I will help every teenager out there with fashion advice weekly, and upload daily posts to my blog. I also post my favorite DIY's to help y'all out! And let's just say I constantly DIY its part of my life, so I know what I'm talking about. I would absolutely love to hear from my viewers, get tips and I absolutely welcome constructive critisism :-)

Aug 14, 2014

Janet B.

It's a pretty good blog though :-)

Aug 14, 2014

katie s.

Oh okay thanks renay I was never for sure!

Aug 14, 2014

Belle M.

I tried to open it and this showed up...

Aug 14, 2014

Rissa G.

There's a few mistakes in that improvisation, as well..^ haha sorry for being a Debby downer.

* my aim is to help my fellow teenagers with fashion advice weekly. I will be uploading posts daily.

* let's just say, I am constantly doing DIY projects, it's a part of my life, so I'd like to share with you all the knowledge I have. (The I know what I'm talking about comes off a bit blunt and know It all tbh)

* I would absolutely love to hear from my viewers, get tip, and criticism is always welcome

Aug 14, 2014

Nicolet K.

Thank you everyone and it is published I don't know why it says that maybe try typing the URL into the internet?

Aug 14, 2014

Nicolet K.

Thank you Janet I will defo make the changes 😀

Aug 14, 2014

Nicolet K.

Thank you for your inputs and thank you so much that you checked the blog/ tried to check😀

Aug 16, 2014

Shannon S.

OMG, So going to check it out xx