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Demitria G.

Aug 27, 2012

Demitria G.

Hello!

I have started a blog - that's geared towards a lot of topics, but I seem to have found my brand or infinite personality during college thanks to a few bar trips and nights out! My friends deemed me as "She-Wolf" I have just recently taken a big girl job and want to blog about being in the real world and products reviews and how they tie into my "brand." I have my first blog up from last week and will be writing another tonight. Please critique and tell me what you think :)

Http://theshewolfdiaries.blogspot.com

Demitria

Shelley W.

Aug 27, 2012

Shelley W.

So its a lifestyle blog? I like it. But I'm having a hard time grasping your "brand". What is it that your trying to ultimately achieve? When I think of "brand" I think of the client I'm assisting now with her cupcake business who looks like a '40's pin-up girl with an apron. She plans on branching off into make-up and tying it in with her cupcake brand. Eyeshadow palettes named after her popular cupcake flavors. I'm just using her as an example in regards to branding but her lifestyle is literally geared towards the '40's pin-up and these insanely delicious cupcakes that have sexy names. I look forward to reading about your adventures in the world and your personal insight. And since your blog is about fearless women hence the name She- Wolf how about spotlighting fellow She-Wolfs (famous and not famous). I get a little overwhelmed sometimes always reading about famous people doing x,y and z. So to read about someone that I can relate to is very refreshing. You can post a pic of them and do a short bio. You're writing is on point and it could lead to some great opportunities if executed right. Its not unknown for bloggers to get paid writing positions with magazines. I hope I was some help. ;) 

Demitria G.

Aug 28, 2012

Demitria G.

Thanks! That was great insight - I should say maybe I'm gearing it towards fearless woman like you said? 

Demitria G.

Aug 28, 2012

Demitria G.

I am posting another blog tonight, you are more than welcome to read and critique as well!

Demitria G.

Aug 28, 2012

Demitria G.

I also am a wee bit quirky and sarcastic so I want my writing to reflect that without being offending as well

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